Estelle Platini<p>"Rewriting a passive construction to be active almost always makes what you’re saying clearer."</p><p>Example: Millions of dollars were embezzled from the company.<br />Revision: Two executives embezzled millions of dollars from the company.</p><p>Eva Parish: <a href="https://evaparish.com/blog/how-i-edit#passive-voice" target="_blank" rel="nofollow noopener noreferrer" translate="no"><span class="invisible">https://</span><span class="ellipsis">evaparish.com/blog/how-i-edit#</span><span class="invisible">passive-voice</span></a><br /><span class="h-card" translate="no"><a href="https://ohai.social/@patrascan" class="u-url mention">@<span>patrascan</span></a></span> <span class="h-card" translate="no"><a href="https://universeodon.com/@Nazani" class="u-url mention">@<span>Nazani</span></a></span> <span class="h-card" translate="no"><a href="https://a.gup.pe/u/technique" class="u-url mention">@<span>technique</span></a></span> <span class="h-card" translate="no"><a href="https://a.gup.pe/u/writing" class="u-url mention">@<span>writing</span></a></span></p><p><a href="https://techhub.social/tags/fragility" class="mention hashtag" rel="tag">#<span>fragility</span></a> <a href="https://techhub.social/tags/media" class="mention hashtag" rel="tag">#<span>media</span></a> <a href="https://techhub.social/tags/press" class="mention hashtag" rel="tag">#<span>press</span></a> <a href="https://techhub.social/tags/passiveVoice" class="mention hashtag" rel="tag">#<span>passiveVoice</span></a> <a href="https://techhub.social/tags/passiveForm" class="mention hashtag" rel="tag">#<span>passiveForm</span></a> <a href="https://techhub.social/tags/grammar" class="mention hashtag" rel="tag">#<span>grammar</span></a> <a href="https://techhub.social/tags/news" class="mention hashtag" rel="tag">#<span>news</span></a> <a href="https://techhub.social/tags/information" class="mention hashtag" rel="tag">#<span>information</span></a> <a href="https://techhub.social/tags/selfCare" class="mention hashtag" rel="tag">#<span>selfCare</span></a> <a href="https://techhub.social/tags/reputation" class="mention hashtag" rel="tag">#<span>reputation</span></a> <a href="https://techhub.social/tags/English" class="mention hashtag" rel="tag">#<span>English</span></a> <a href="https://techhub.social/tags/writing" class="mention hashtag" rel="tag">#<span>writing</span></a> <a href="https://techhub.social/tags/editing" class="mention hashtag" rel="tag">#<span>editing</span></a> <a href="https://techhub.social/tags/editingTips" class="mention hashtag" rel="tag">#<span>editingTips</span></a> <a href="https://techhub.social/tags/impunity" class="mention hashtag" rel="tag">#<span>impunity</span></a> <a href="https://techhub.social/tags/litterature" class="mention hashtag" rel="tag">#<span>litterature</span></a> <a href="https://techhub.social/tags/books" class="mention hashtag" rel="tag">#<span>books</span></a></p>